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Hello, *VonDiezyl.

The description of this poem really fits. It is really for the people who don't have hope but they don't realize there is, and they can't just find it. The reader encourages his/her friend to realize there is still hope in his/her friend's problem.

The reader encourages him/her not to commit suicide as it just breaks his/her life. Even if he/she looks fragile and must be carried with care, he/she shall not break because of his/her weakness.

The poem has a very sad emotion while the reader tells his/her friend not to take his/her life because of a very bad problem and the more he/she hides the more he/she will have greater chances.

As what the poem says, it is not right to leave friends when they say they are depressed and want to commit suicide.

I hope you have another poem and I hope it will be in a good quality.
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm sincerely glad that you were able to connect with my poem :) and I'm truly grateful that you took the time to write this amazing critique :heart: I'm speechless, I really am.

Thank you so much for the support :heart: it means the world to me :)
MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
You are so welcome, *VonDiezyl! :D
*hugs and kisses*
VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
You are very welcome again! :D
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