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This poem truly defines a broken relationship or a traumatizing event to a girl such as rape. It seems she can't hold it anymore that's why there is a gory content in the poem once you imagine the image of the girl in your mind.

Depression is the main theme in this poem. It has a very fine detail about a girl who is always very sad everyday.

Even though this poem displays everything about the sad and dark emotions of a person or a woman who has undergone something that totally cut off her world from the normal happy days, the poem seems to short and some parts of the punctuation seem to not fit. Anyway, hope you make a good poem soon. :D
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